I hear loud engine noises. I go outside and see a large moving spaceship. It lands and I go inside. I hear creepy sounds and aliens talking from my Mind.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I hear loud engine noises. I go outside and see a large moving spaceship. It lands and I go inside. I hear creepy sounds and aliens talking from my Mind.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
WOW Minal.
ReplyDeleteYour words gave me a good picture in my head.I hope I don't meet the aliens.They don't sound very nice.
I look forward to reading the rest of this story or is it finished?.
Do we get to make the ending up ourselves?.