on your mark get set go I ran as a cheetah I jumped over the hurdles as the other athletes started to catch up up My body started to hurt My Bones hurted so badly as I sprinted so fast I was so close to win and than I Won The End
Thursday, August 12, 2021
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Well done Minal. I love the way you hooked me in with your opening sentence. What an enjoyable piece of writing to read. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for winning Minal.It looks like the little orange fish got second.That must mean that the turtle behind the hurdles, got 3rd.
ReplyDeleteWell done to you all.
What did you do to warm up for the race?.
Good morning Minal.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have a had a look at your blog today.
Take care and keep safe.
Have a lovely day today Minal.
ReplyDeleteKeep warm and take care.
I've been watching some of the Paralympics Minal.
ReplyDeleteHave you watched any of them?.
I have watched swimming andgGoal ball.
Hello Minal.
ReplyDeleteIt's been great supporting you while we are in the room 6 bubble.
Have a great weekend and I look forward to checking out the Minecraft activity once you post it.
Hello Minal.I hope you had a great day being back in the class.I enjoyed listening to what the children did while on the extended break from school.
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much Mrs Clifford and Mrs Cassidy
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